mspeck21 Posted January 3, 2012 Report Share Posted January 3, 2012 http://www.examiner.com/high-school-sports-in-harrisburg/quarter-mark-pa-high-school-basketball-review Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mspeck21 Posted January 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2012 http://www.examiner.com/high-school-sports-in-harrisburg/quarter-mark-pa-high-school-basketball-review any thoughts or comments? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Thebballguru Posted January 4, 2012 Report Share Posted January 4, 2012 (edited) I don't follow PA basketball, but I will offer my feedback on your article. In my opinion, you should take another look and edit starting from the paragraph about 3 point shots through the end of the article. I noticed several grammatical errors and the way it is written seems scattered and repetitive in places. Aside from that, the information contained seems to be ok. Hope that helps. Edited January 4, 2012 by Thebballguru Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mspeck21 Posted January 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2012 I don't follow PA basketball, but I will offer my feedback on your article. In my opinion, you should take another look and edit starting from the paragraph about 3 point shots through the end of the article. I noticed several grammatical errors and the way it is written seems scattered and repetitive in places. Aside from that, the information contained seems to be ok. Hope that helps. thanks for the comment! just started writing about a month ago and am just out of high school, in college righti now Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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