mspeck21
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any comments or thoughts?
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I don't follow PA basketball, but I will offer my feedback on your article.
In my opinion, you should take another look and edit starting from the paragraph about 3 point shots through the end of the article. I noticed several grammatical errors and the way it is written seems scattered and repetitive in places. Aside from that, the information contained seems to be ok. Hope that helps.
thanks for the comment! just started writing about a month ago and am just out of high school, in college righti now
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Under Armor Game
in Class 5A & Class 6A
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