Is this a letter that was sent to the TSSAA or just meant to be discovered here?
While I agree with Coach Blair about there being good points, I do find it lacking in much of what is needed, specifically the math.
The hyperbolic comments about it generating more revenue than the the foozeball and baseball championships combined essentially means nothing without projected verified numbers to back it.
If this is something that you plan to send to them, I would encourage you to collaborate with several other interested coaches from the state to help gel the proposal. I'm sure there are several coaches who have specific details on the related costs of what you proposed and how they can be implemented.
I very much enjoy your enthusiasm for the sport, I just worry that the letter reads as a passionate fan who severely lacks understanding of the intricacies behind the TSSAA and their thought process.
Also, as general pet peeve of mine, the sentence structure, layout and grammar are a bit of a distraction from the message and I would recommend a few changes (even so far as to offer my very limited services if you'd like).
I hope you don't take offense to this as it was meant to be a helpful criticism.